Hey there, I definitely see your tales influence!
I really like the change in tempo going on, and feel as tough your transitions fit together nicely. Although it's not there, I can definitely hear Genus yelling "Pancake Time!!" somewhere in the background lol. Also, the array of instruments that you pull from adds a nice variety to this piece.
One thing that I did notice is that the kickdrum level sounds a little off to me. I'm not sure if it's just my headphones or whatever, but you might want to ask for some specific input on volume levels of your percussion section. Other than that though, I enjoyed this piece quite a bit! Can't wait to see the finished product.